tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8121537641874917903.post2565840360264178614..comments2013-08-03T05:10:34.470-07:00Comments on MU Voices - Winter 2013: For Dexter by Donald ConradMU Writing Centerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10148973212424297139noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8121537641874917903.post-85467959730694556432013-04-23T13:06:20.163-07:002013-04-23T13:06:20.163-07:00I love the way you have set the mood in your poem ...I love the way you have set the mood in your poem with your word choices. The back vowels in "slow," "done," "old," and "strokes" lend a feeling of sadness and finality. The meaning of the words "slow," "done," "tears," "tired," and "fades" contributes to an overall feeling of poignancy. Without even knowing Dexter, I am touched by his passing.Marian Gonsiorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13251847210828268322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8121537641874917903.post-52451207727272327922013-04-23T12:38:08.759-07:002013-04-23T12:38:08.759-07:00This is empathetic and insightful.This is empathetic and insightful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07909811590822047203noreply@blogger.com